Like two lost pieces of a puzzle,
We fell down together. Like a dice,
We rolled over and over,
But on two different boards.
How come we never met before?
When the ship was ashore, and
The boat left.
Like we took the same train, but
In two different compartments.
How come we never crossed each other?
Not many could fathom this, but
With rounds of interrogation
A lot of contemplation
And all the questions left
Unanswered. Unspoken.
Personally, I feel this might be your best.
ReplyDeleteThoughts kind of matched with mine which I thought but never wrote.
"Like a dice,
We rolled over and over,
But on two different boards."
Keep 'em coming.
the funny part was when the two people looked at each other in the train and looked away after a second!!:-P
ReplyDeletereal and amazing! can relate to the puzzles unsolved and those luckily solved. loved this one! :)
ReplyDeleteloved the whole idea... beautifully written
ReplyDeletelike a die...we rolled
ReplyDeletenicely done otherwise...deep thoughts in simple questions
Rechtzeit.... i will sire! thanks a ton for posting your comment :-)
ReplyDeleteAnonymous.... thank you! but they were in two different compartments. they never met. and when they did, no questions were asked and hence no answers were given.
Avra... i know you could relate... thanks man :)
ReplyDeleteRiya... thannnnkkss so much! :)