Thursday, September 29, 2011

That shalt Not be Spoken

Like two lost pieces of a puzzle,
We fell down together. Like a dice,
We rolled over and over,
But on two different boards.
How come we never met before?

When the ship was ashore, and
The boat left.
Like we took the same train, but
In two different compartments.
How come we never crossed each other?

Not many could fathom this, but
With rounds of interrogation
A lot of contemplation
And all the questions left
Unanswered. Unspoken.

7 comments:

  1. Personally, I feel this might be your best.
    Thoughts kind of matched with mine which I thought but never wrote.

    "Like a dice,
    We rolled over and over,
    But on two different boards."

    Keep 'em coming.

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  2. the funny part was when the two people looked at each other in the train and looked away after a second!!:-P

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  3. real and amazing! can relate to the puzzles unsolved and those luckily solved. loved this one! :)

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  4. loved the whole idea... beautifully written

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  5. like a die...we rolled
    nicely done otherwise...deep thoughts in simple questions

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  6. Rechtzeit.... i will sire! thanks a ton for posting your comment :-)

    Anonymous.... thank you! but they were in two different compartments. they never met. and when they did, no questions were asked and hence no answers were given.

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  7. Avra... i know you could relate... thanks man :)


    Riya... thannnnkkss so much! :)

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